Writing a personal essay requires to face advertisements on information as well as many details which make it interesting. Personal narration is about a personal experience, so it’s written in the first person. The essay should be written to have an emotional impact on the reader. This includes –a lot of references to sensory perceptions & emotions.
–Use word details and imagery.
“Title “:- Mashed Potato pizza
“Introduction”:- My grandpa always tells me the people who laugh at their own mistakes will get everyone to laugh along with them. Yesterday, I learned that he is right.
“Begining of the story”:- Stay in line Mrs.Martin said, I know right away that my friend Naomi wouldn’t be able to cut. I looked at Naomi and frowned. Soon the line began to move faster and I followed along hoping that there would still be pizza. When I reached the counter, I looked at the choices. I could only see the chicken and mashed potatoes, macaroni & cheese and fish. I could hear the rumbling of my very disappointed stomach.
Then, out of the corner of my eye, I saw the last piece of pepperoni pizza. I got so thrilled.
“Middle Event”:- Pepperoni pizza -I said politely Mrs.Martin handed me the pizza. I took the paper plate so quickly that the pizza landed in the pan of hot, buttery mashed potatoes.
I could feel my face turning redder and redder. All I could hear laughter from the kids in line. As I looked at the upside-down pizza, I heard Mrs.Martin’s voice, “Maria would you like a side of mashed potatoes with your pizza?”
“End of the story”:- I looked up & saw Naomi, she was laughing too. With a nervous smile, I said: ” of course”.
Mrs. Martin smiled and scooped the mashed potato pizza on my plate. I looked around at my friends, and we all laugh again.
“Conclusion”:- I never really believed my grandpa until I saw my friends laughing with me. The laughing made me feel good instead of just clumsy.